Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
There are many types of
community
in the world. Some of them strive for new stuff, while the rest prefer to do what they are used to. In my opinion, it is better to do new activities Fix the agreement mistake
communities
such
as to visit
new places and Change the verb form
visiting
to eat
new foods
In my view, to try new Change the verb form
eating
things
is better than getting used to same
Correct article usage
the same
things
because nowadays there are a lot of new things
such
as places, gadgets, foods
and others. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Therefore
, people
should aim to do new activities. In that way, their worldview and thinking will improve and they will be modern
than others. To try new Correct quantifier usage
more modern
things
may change people
's character and style because if people
attempt new things
, they will have a broadened outlook.
On the other hand
, to get used to the same lifestyle is acceptable, too, because if nation
Fix the agreement mistake
nations
do
accustomed Change the verb form
does
things
, they live easily. Thus
, to do habituated routine is a normal situation for people
. The reason most people
prefer to get used to familiar things
, they do not like to create or strive for new things
. They love to do their accustomed things
.
In conclusion, to try new things
is better than to get used to similar things
because I think people
must devise and try new things
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