Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little to be done to rectify this. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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coming out from
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outlets could have
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impact on the way of life of the public,
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anyone who directly controls a media house will
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determine what goes out. I strongly agree with
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for two reasons; disseminated
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travels fast and wide and
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will rather submit to the directives of their employers most time. The lifestyle and behaviour of every society
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influenced by the
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available to her.
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outlets have the responsibility of educating and keeping the
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informed. Because
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travels wide and fast, it takes just
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effort to get many
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to accept a piece of message from
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.
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,whatever the intentions of the originators could have been will influence the behaviour of the society.
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, some years back, major media houses controlled by businessmen and politicians informed the
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indigenous
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of Northern Nigeria
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particular immunization is harmful and so should be avoided. Many
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believed it and acted
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.
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in the area.
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,with the high level of unemployment, newsmen will rather remain loyal to their employer in order not to
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their jobs.
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, employees can water down a
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item just to satisfy the desire of their boss, who are themselves way too influential.
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, major happenings may be
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or
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that the populace is only offered half-truth.
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, many
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will be misinformed and
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has a way of shaping
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's character.
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a major drug baron was arrested by the police, but because of his contact with very powerful politicians, he was left off the hook
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reporting that the police were complicit, they were forced to do
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. In conclusion, I believe that the type and content of
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fed to the public
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would impact
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a society's attitude.
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, as
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would censor
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items not favourable to them or even fire employees who stand for objective reportage.
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