Some people believe government should spend more money in saving languages of few speaker from dying completely. Other think this is a waste of financial resourses. Discuss both view and give opinion.

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saving our culture. Some people think it is unnecessary to spend funds to
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retrieve
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, while others
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argue
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that government should take the responsibility to conserve that
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. In my opinion, I support
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should protect these
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from extinction. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why these
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do not need to save.
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, most extinct
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are hard to learn, speak and understand. Compared with these endangered
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, these
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which are prevented in
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modern society are constantly simplified and improved by
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in views of history. The endangered
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are extremely complicated and not worthy to be conserved.
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, international
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gradually become the main trend because of globalization. It is easy for the public to make use of English to communicate with each other at home or in the workplace
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, unpopular
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are not practical for everyone's life.
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, I believe that the government should prevent these old
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from extinction. The
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represent the culture and they are essential factors for a civilization.
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the community
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can easily lose their
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and culture
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as history and literature if their
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die out. They might not have an identity of their country and are not patriotic anymore.
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, by learning these endangered
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, schools can study the history of
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to have the breakthrough of academic research. It is reported that many researchers find the mechanism of the construction of a pyramid through the old Egyptian Language. In conclusion,
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the extinct language is not useful for our material life, I still firmly argue that the study them can know more knowledge and become wise.
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