Some people believe that free social service should be made compulsory for high school students .do you agree or disagree

In a city, there are several social services that are provided for the public,

such

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as transportation in the form of

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and trains, libraries, and gyms. Several communities have an opinion that those services should be free to use by high

school

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students

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a

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strong agreement

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with

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argument

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two reasons.

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policy will increase the study's rate of participation, especially for the high

school

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. The percentage of the

students

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admitted to the secondary

education

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level (70-90%) is significantly lower than the primary one (more than 100%). The factors that contributed to these facts are the parents' motivation to push their children

in joining

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the learning ecosystem and the high price of schooling.

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, families do not have to pay anything for the six years of the first period of schooling because there are so many public

schools

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at that level.

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, the number of free and public high

schools

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decreased extravagantly if compared to the primary

schools

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.

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, children who can only enter private

schools

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must pay a higher price.

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, making

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social services free for high schoolers will motivate society to participate in the higher level of

education

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.

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, the program will improve the learning quality.

Education

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happens not only in the

school

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but

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in the environment.

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, the

students

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have to be safe and convenient in terms of transportation and be provided with several facilities that support their

learnings

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learning

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.

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, they should not be bothered by the economic limitations as it will hinder their studies.

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, free swimming pools are essential for the physical development of the subjects. In short, free public facilities for high

school

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students

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should be a compulsory policy as it will improve the quantity and quality of secondary

education

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