In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In recent times, many communities
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nations
despite the decline Fix the agreement mistake
nation
of
crimes. Change preposition
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While
others say that feel less safe than previous, I believe that, the increase in unemployment and the lack of authority interest in the guarantee.
On the one hand, society's fears about their freedom are rising in recent times. In other words
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several years, these unemployed workers might be left with no options other than involve
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Furthermore
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the state lack an attitude towards the freedom of the nations? Verb problem
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Thus
, this
does not appear to be the case. For example
, around the globe Western countries where have less care and up-to-date equipment required to combat crimes. These issues have reduced the level of confidence of the citizens regarding their surveillance.
On the other hand
, despite the fact that politics should provide employment opportunities for its citizens. This
could be done by providing low-interest loans and grants for the unemployed with consultant business plans and also
encouraging them to become entrepreneurs.For instance
, around the world especially, America was able to reduce crime rates with involved the crisis and crime reduced significantly. Therefore
, the authority should protect its citizens and invest. This
could be done by employing efficient insurance, organizing and providing them with the latest equipment in preventing crimes as a result
population would feel safer.
In conclusion,although
communities fear for their guarantee, the issue can be solved through the ministry tackling economic decline issues and providing the equipment needed to prevent crime increases as well.Submitted by gorgeousnf on
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