Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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by arguing that , they will be better at schools. Students will be much safe and there will be a high parent-

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relationship when they are studying at

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they will have much needed social interaction with other

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and freedom when they are studying at schools. Since these ,factors

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writer believes that school

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is far better than

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with , some

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around the world try to keep their

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within their premises and try to give them

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it is quite uncommon in developing nations,

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in developed countries practise

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for various reasons.

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, their main points are , to stabilise the

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's security and to improve the bond between

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and

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, a recent report published in one of the famous European newsletters has shown, about 1-2% of

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in Europe are concerned to give

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to their

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mainly based on their security .

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, school-based

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is the most popular

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worldwide. apart from that ,

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brilliant

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gives the

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the opportunity to engage with their peers and the chance to physically interact with their teachers . Apart from building interpersonal relationships and thinking patterns by

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, students will get the opportunity of free-thinking, which is the base for the development of future mature individuals .

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, one of the leading social Scientists in America once said , if you want to move the world forward , as

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should be given the freedom of thinking . In conclusion ,

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some people opine to give

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-based

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for students mainly due to security problems , most of the others vote on school-based

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since it will help to develop more mature and independent individual at the future . Considering all these facts ,

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writer wishes to opine that the advantages of

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system will be far more than the

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-based one.