Nowadays, parents send their children abroad for further education. At what age should they send their children abroad? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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modern era, the education systems

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globalised to connect with each other easily. The student is sent by their guardians to course abroad.

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essay will discuss what age can send, and the advantages and disadvantages. I believe that 18+ is

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age to study abroad because children will be maturated at

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age and can be able to manage difficult situations easily. The main advantage of studying abroad is recruitment can be able to study courses at internationally accredited universities. Which will assist to keep their knowledge widely. If they course worldwide recognized colleges they are able to get jobs in Multinational companies. The children can develop their communication and technological skills and

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create friendships globally.

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, multi-racial culture will be gained to develop psychologically. For example one of my school friends studied in the UK and ,

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he has been working in GOOgle while he obtained his permanent residency in the USA. He is now well settled financially and professionally. ,

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I hope foreign education rapidly increased in our society because of technological growth. In past decades, our society did not know how to get students visas to study abroad or else what is courses application abroad. In my point of ,view foreign education will develop students' interpersonal skills but I suggest

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degree abroad because students do not require to depend on their families.

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