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In many countries, women and men are working full time, therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The bar chart illustrates how many
people
 were employed in four major industry sectors from 1910 till 2010. Overall, the services industry experienced the fastest growth and by the end of the period employed more
people
 than the other three sectors combined.
In contrast
, fewer
people
 worked in agriculture, energy and construction, and manufacturing in 2010 than in 1910. The services sector demonstrated a strong upward trend throughout the period.
As a result
, it had become the largest employer by 1930 with just over 10
million
 workers and had exceeded the 20
million
 mark by 2010. Manufacturing, which was the dominant industry at the beginning of the period, continued to grow until 1950 when it peaked at approximately eight
million
people
 employed before falling into decline. With regard to the remaining two sectors, agriculture and energy and construction gradually shrank from providing jobs for around 2.5 and 3.5
million
people
 respectively in 1910 to under two
million
 each in 2010.(Word count: 160)Charts with Dates
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