Some people think governments should build more train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think building more and wider roads is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, with the development of technology, our society becomes more and more convenient

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some transport facilities.

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, the problem of

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jam

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comes to a popular public topic. Some people agree that it is useful to build some lines of

train

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subway

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. While others argue the essence to solve the problem is the build of roads. The

train

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and

subway

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give

public

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some alternatives to decide the way of

traveling

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which is helpful for the

traffic

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stress. There are so many

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stations and

train

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stop

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across the city that people can choose

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, we travel somewhere for

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vacation by

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. We

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take the

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when

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to work, that

is probably only takes

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a few minutes. So sometimes we prefer

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some other transport

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of driving

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the

road

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. If we do not

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the

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as frequently as before, there will no longer have

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problems.

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does not automatically mean that only constructing more

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and

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lines is perfect. After all, that cannot decrease the situation directly. In

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case, I

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suggest

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focusing on the wider roads. The high-developed roads do help people

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easily and safely. Imagine a wide

road

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allows 8 cars to

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in the same direction together

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take less time than a

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only allows 2 cars. The bigger width of

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road

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makes an effort for drivers to

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faster.

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of working out

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problem. All in all, due to the fact of busy

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, all we should do is to not only establish the

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and

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lines

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but

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improve the

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construction.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

280 words

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