Some people think governments should build more train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think building more and wider roads is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, with the development of technology, our society becomes more and more convenient

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some transport facilities.

Similarly

, the problem of

traffic

jam

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comes to a popular public topic. Some people agree that it is useful to build some lines of

train

subway

. While others argue the essence to solve the problem is the build of roads. The

train

and

subway

give

public

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the public

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some alternatives to decide the way of

traveling

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which is helpful for the

traffic

stress. There are so many

subway

stations and

train

stop

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across the city that people can choose

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from.

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For instance

, we travel somewhere for

the

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vacation by

train

. We

also

take the

subway

when

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going

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to work, that

is probably only takes

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a few minutes. So sometimes we prefer

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some other transport

instead

of driving

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the

road

. If we do not

drive

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the

road

as frequently as before, there will no longer have

the

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traffic

problems.

However

this

does not automatically mean that only constructing more

train

and

subway

lines is perfect. After all, that cannot decrease the situation directly. In

this

case, I

also

suggest

that

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focusing on the wider roads. The high-developed roads do help people

drive

easily and safely. Imagine a wide

road

allows 8 cars to

drive

in the same direction together

that is

take less time than a

road

only allows 2 cars. The bigger width of

road

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the road

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makes an effort for drivers to

drive

faster.

As a result

of working out

traffic

problem. All in all, due to the fact of busy

traffic

, all we should do is to not only establish the

subway

and

train

lines

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but

also

improve the

road

construction.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

280 words

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Some people think governments should build more train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think building more and wider roads is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Teenagers face a lot of difficulties at home and at school. What are the causes for this? How can parents provide solutions?

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some people think that the best way to solve global environment problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In some countries, schools are open late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching T.V . However, TV cannot replace the book as a learning tool,which is why children are less well educated today,to what extent do you agree with this statement ?