many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss both views and give your own opinion

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some authorities strongly believe that, economic progress is essential and can be counted as one

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crowning achievements.

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, individuals think that

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other factors are vital to

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out the best.

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essay will discuss both views. One justification often given for paying a lot of attention to make a breath through in terms of

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is that

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government assert that, it can be much more sensible in people`s

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and making popularity. When people trust their own president, all

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wanted by

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is to live life in a better condition, not in hardship.

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, when they can afford their basic needs,

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condition will be counted as an impressive accomplishment of that government. Recent research

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ascribed economic situation as a factor for making fame.

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, authorities become much more famous and win the respect.

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, individuals may not count economic success as an unprecedented success and think other minor things are vital as others. Their minds

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that

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other factors can have considerable consequences on

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economic

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but

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relationship cannot be inverse. We can have easier life provided that being

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to make a remarkable improvement in different stages. A good illustration is that

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of overcoming redundancy will have some consequences on our

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and automatically

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alter itself. Taking everything into consideration, l strongly believe that, in a

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all the factors play a vital role

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improving. There is no logical reason to just concentrate on a factor for reaching a peak.