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The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future

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Nowadays, there is a change in
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’s work behaviour. A lot of
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 take more than one job in recent years than previous decades. In
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 essay, I intend to explore more reasons behind
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 notion and give some possible solutions to it. It is interesting to note that our population able to do multitasking activities.
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 phenomenon happens
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 of inflation which occurs every
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. Basic needs and vital items increase their price
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 by
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 and folks’ income is merely stuck in the same level of
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. Given the inflation, living cost is increasing
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 by
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, which result in the price of renting accommodation becoming more expensive.
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, in the city centre of Jakarta, the most affordable boarding house is around 2 million, whereas the minimum basic
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 of Jakarta is 4 million. It cost half to pay the rent and
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 still need to eat and other’s matters. To overcome
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 issue, there are some suggestions that
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 can do toward
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 working condition.
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, citizens have to pursue their higher education in order to get a stable job and a high paid
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. By having a degree from a top tier university, they will easily accept into a reputable company that offers a quite good
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.
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, as we live in a volatile and ambiguous era, we need to adjust to current development. Generally speaking,
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 should have many skills
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because multi-skilled person in high demand in the industry. We can
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 improve foreign languages especially Chinese. Many multinational companies require their staff to understand and speak Chinese. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm that due to inflation, working habit is changing. We need to prepare for pursuing higher education and gaining more skills in another aspect.

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological integration
  • enhanced productivity
  • job requirements
  • globalization
  • the gig economy
  • freelance work
  • traditional employment models
  • work-life balance
  • lifelong learning
  • adaptability
  • soft skills
  • hard skills
  • transferable skills
  • networking
  • professional relationships
  • digital literacy
  • technological proficiency
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