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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, Businesses have advertising about their
products
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 which are a recent development in various ways not only advertising on television
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also
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 on social media. A reason to support my idea will be outlined in the following paragraphs. Advertisings are essential nowadays
thus
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 they create awareness for a customer who cannot know about their
product
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.
Although
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 they launch a new
product
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 to a
market
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,
Companies
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 are not use advertising to let people know about their
product
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,
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consequently
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this
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 is a problem for the
companies
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.
As a result
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, numerous
companies
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 use a tool
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 known as advertising to solve
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 problem and make
consumers
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 to awareness of their new
products
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,
for instance
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, Apple which is manufacturing iPhone
product
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 try to give information about a new feature of the recent
product
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 by organization event that makes people around the world following the news closely when they held the event.
In addition
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, advertising about the new
product
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 makes a competition between the company and other
companies
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 which are in the same
market
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. So
this
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 makes a benefit to
consumers
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for example
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, when competitions occur in the
market
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, each company will develop their
products
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 in numerous ways to defeat an enemy in the
market
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,
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, competitions cause pricing in the
market
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 by discount to persuade
consumers
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.
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, these are benefits for
consumers
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. In conclusion, I strongly agree about the advertising of the new
products
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 which make benefit to customers.
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, it makes the competition to each company.
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, these are creativity competitions and Create the best benefits for
consumers
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.
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