The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The maps present the changes
occurred
on the Correct pronoun usage
that occurred
island
.
Overall
, in
the difference between Change preposition
apply
construction
of some tourist facilities lies in the development of numerous Add an article
the construction
of
houses Change preposition
apply
as well as
roads, which have been replaced by primeval
land, Change the spelling
primaeval
This
had led to an expansion of the island
. Before the development, there were few trees on the island
with the beach in the west. The total length of the island
is approximately 250 metres.
Moving into the next
map, there is central
reception, which is surrounded by Correct article usage
the central
vehicle
track in the middle of the Correct article usage
a vehicle
island
. The vehicle track goes off in an
southeastern direction, the pier is built. Change the article
a
Restaurant
is Add an article
The restaurant
on
Change preposition
apply
the
opposite Correct article usage
apply
of
the pier. There are two accommodation areas connecting with Change preposition
apply
Correct article usage
the foothpath
foothpath
. Correct your spelling
footpath
Furthermore
, the tourist can swim near by
the beach in the west.
To summarize the two maps, there are significant changes. Not only lots of facilities are built on the Change preposition
apply
island
, but the sea also
is used for activities. The new island
has become a good place for tourism.Submitted by jh896b10 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "goes" was used 2 times.
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