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In some cultures, the old age is more valued, while in some cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#cultures #age #youth
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first
 part of nations
tend
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 to appreciate young people more than
oldest
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 one, while
others
 strongly believe that
oldest
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are
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 more valuable.
This
 essay is going to discuss both points of view below. On the one hand, old age people widely considered to be wise and tend to teach
others
 to valuable things they were learnt during their
life
. Oldest
have
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 an immense amount of knowledge and experienced absolutely different situations in their
life
,
that is
 why they are skilled more and able to give valuable
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advice
advices
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for
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young
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the young
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generation
.
For instance
, old age people know their culture, and local place where they were born more and could pass their knowledge to the new
generation
,
that is
 why they should be valued more.
On the other hand
, youth are thought to be more open mind to new
knowldege
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knowledge
, and skill new things extremely quick compare with
old
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generation
. They are really enjoying their
life
 and tend to share their positivity to
others
,
that is
 why
young
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the young
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generation
 is more outgoing and assumed to be always ready to new challenges in
life
, these traits
are very appreciate
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 old
generation
. To conclude, some cultures tend to appreciate old age significantly more than youth, while
others
 have the opposite view.
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