Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Nowadays all are working professionals, in which majorly
people
are doing office jobs, sitting in front of workstations long continuous hours.
Therefore
to take a break, every
person
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variety
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of interest and passions which they would like to pursue. As all human beings are different, everyone's choice of activities and hobbies
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also
vary.
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of
people
find excitement in discovering things,
for
instance
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a lake hidden in the valley
some where
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on a long drive. For some
people
doing new
things
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all the time gives
adrenaline
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rush. These
kind
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don't only restrict
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new places, they love trying new cuisines as well.
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I am
this
kind
of
person
, I like new
people
to meet, something exotic food, drinks,
some place
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I have never been
too
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.These
people
like exploring untouched and wild places. Change is the only constant thing for them.
This
shows the tendency of a
person
to adapt and
mold
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in
environment
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easily. They are more confident when facing adverse situations in
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lives, as
result
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of exposure and being of adventurous nature.
However
, all human beings are not
same
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, so we have
people
who cannot accept change easily.
This
kind
likes
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comfort zone and
hence
keep pursuing hobbies and activities in which they are more familiar. I feel the main reason behind
this
, is they cannot risk trying new things, whether
that is
food or a place.
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kind
of
people
like to keep all affairs simple and low key. They don't want to tackle excitement and adventure. I am not saying, these are not passionate
people
, but they are not open to the idea of something new,fresh. Everything should be
same
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,as the way it has been for them, constant, unchanged.
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I feel
these
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kind
of
persons
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are quite reserved and calm. They like inner peace more than
adrenaline
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rush. To summarize, everyone
have
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there
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own choices. Few
likes
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to be in
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there
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familiar zone of food,places, activities, whereas for some only something new and fresh is acceptable and exciting. As I am a
person
who always tries something different, I like
this
outgoing and always discovering something attitude.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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