Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.
Nowadays all are working professionals, in which majorly
people
are doing office jobs, sitting in front of workstations long continuous hours. Therefore
to take a break, every person
have
Change the verb form
has
variety
of interest and passions which they would like to pursue.
As all human beings are different, everyone's choice of activities and hobbies Add an article
a variety
are
Change the verb form
are also varied
also
vary. Lot
of Change the article
A lot
people
find excitement in discovering things,for
instance
a lake hidden in the valley Add a comma
,instance
some where
on a long drive. For some Join the words
somewhere
people
doing new things
all the time gives Add a comma
,things
adrenaline
rush. These Add an article
an adrenaline
kind
don't only restrict Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
in
new places, they love trying new cuisines as well. Change preposition
to
Personally
I am Add a comma
,Personally
this
kind
of person
, I like new people
to meet, something exotic food, drinks, some place
I have never been Correct your spelling
someplace
too
.These Correct your spelling
to
people
like exploring untouched and wild places. Change is the only constant thing for them. This
shows the tendency of a person
to adapt and mold
in Change the spelling
mould
environment
easily. They are more confident when facing adverse situations in Add an article
the environment
there
lives, as Replace the word
their
result
of exposure and being of adventurous nature.
Correct article usage
a result
However
, all human beings are not same
, so we have Correct article usage
the same
people
who cannot accept change easily. This
kind
likes there
comfort zone and Correct your spelling
their
hence
keep pursuing hobbies and activities in which they are more familiar. I feel the main reason behind this
, is they cannot risk trying new things, whether that is
food or a place. These
Change the determiner
This kind
These kinds
kind
of people
like to keep all affairs simple and low key. They don't want to tackle excitement and adventure. I am not saying, these are not passionate people
, but they are not open to the idea of something new,fresh. Everything should be same
,as the way it has been for them, constant, unchanged. Correct article usage
the same
Personally
I feel Add a comma
,Personally
these
Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
kind
of persons
are quite reserved and calm. They like inner peace more than Replace the word
people
adrenaline
rush.
To summarize, everyone Correct article usage
the adrenaline
have
Change the verb form
has
there
own choices. Few Replace the word
their
likes
to be in Change the verb form
like
Add an article
the there
a there
there
familiar zone of food,places, activities, whereas for some only something new and fresh is acceptable and exciting. As I am a Correct your spelling
their
person
who always tries something different, I like this
outgoing and always discovering something attitude.Submitted by Weallneedit9 on
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