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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Parenting is an important chapter of life which eventually plays a vital role in
upbringing
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 of
kids
. Few people suggest that youth of new world has to have knowledge on how to raise their child which should be taught in there academic curriculum. I do have
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same
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 perspective of including
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 a course amid early education. To commence on my point of view, more people leaves in
a nuclear families
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 these days and the number surges as
time
 passes. Individuals work hard from dawn to dusk for disposable money, they do not have enough
time
 for their family and
loose
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the
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control
on
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the child
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child
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. To illustrate,
teenager
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 seeks
paretnal
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parental
 advice now and
then
, there are chances they choose the wrong path if not taken care of. While learning how to be a good guardian,
it
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always helps to show
a
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 right path to
kids
 with proper
time
 management.
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 management can be one of the good parental
ability
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 that should help
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the family
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family
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 to know when they have to look after their children. One should spend
good
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 amount of
time
 with their
kids
especially
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 during the initial stage of life. To exemplify,
kids
 enjoy
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 more
time
 playing with their parents rather than having expensive gifts. Summing up all, unlike bygone days, we rarely found grand guardians in family and due to lack of knowledge in bringing up
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child
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 or with more use of day schools, upbringing of
kids
 are at risk. I strongly recommend
to educate
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 youth for
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better parenting. 20:26
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