many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people however that other types of progress are equally important for a country

For many lands, Authorities claim that Economic progress is the most crucial way

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having wealth in countries

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some claim that there are various sections that are equally vital for

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progress. Personally, a priority investment plan should be considered in different ways following the country’s level of development. On the one hand, Economic growth should be prioritized in undeveloped nations before developing in other progress in order to generate a bunch of incomes, which

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authorities to fulfil the population’s primary needs

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as food, security ,accommodations and clothing and

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improve other sections.

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, the government could utilise

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money on developing facilities which lead to enhancing the quality of individuals’

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and bring prosperity to their region.

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, Individuals in some poor countries ,which

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improved their economy, gained a better lifestyle and welfare compared with somewhere the government invested in other sections.

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, Education's curriculum and system in both school and university should be prioritised in developed and developing nations since the primary demands are not the most crucial for them anymore.

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, nations can achieve their purpose easily

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an incline of effectively educated people.

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, Investing in new technological innovations affects individuals in a positive development

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as living far more comfortably and easily. In conclusion, I personally

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that undeveloped land should be prioritised on Economic growth

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of second needs in order to improve

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welfare and fulfil their primary need

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Education systems and Technological innovations should be mostly improved in developed countries