with the development of online communication, people will never be alone will always be able to make friends. to what extent do you agree?

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never be solitary will find friendship
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forever
with the progress of
online
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transmission. I support
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idea that we could meet a lot of
people
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to impart in the internet era to some degree. on the
one
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hand, ı would like to explore the benefits of online communication on making friends
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the internet. nowadays, There are several transmission vehicles in the world.
One
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of them online imparting. Today,
people
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are communicating
each
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other very quickly and
easyly
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easily
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for
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example
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when you get your mobile phone, you can see your parents on the phone with
one
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just click. Even ıf you
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at the opposite side of the world. it is easy to reach every mankind
whereever
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wherever
you are. Now, there have been much more community groups in
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apply
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mobile applications like
facebook
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Facebook
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,
whattsap
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WhatsApp
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,
and
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etc. when you look at
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their shares and posts online you could understand their mind and character. as you pick to meet
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of them, you do not waste time
to choose
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.
in
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addition
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online dating websites have already enabled thousands of persons worldwide to obtain their soulmates. in general, we have become too busy to spent time meeting new
people
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and getting to know them properly. you can meet so many new
people
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online that you can choose
who
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you would like to get in touch with.
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chatting with
people
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online will enhance your self-reliance and
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the face-to-face interaction.
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, there are many harmful effects online making friendship.
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of all, online hunters may make friends with
people
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online and strive to scam them.
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,
people
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with bad intentions can track you down once they know your name or
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the town
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you live in.
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, there is no way to know who the person you meet online really is. in conclusion , to come to my own opinion,
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there are numerous disadvantages of making friends online, ı prefer to make a pal from
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transmission
in
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internet era.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • geographical gaps
  • interact
  • social media platforms
  • messaging apps
  • revolutionized
  • physical distance
  • online communities
  • camaraderie
  • immediate surroundings
  • unparalleled opportunities
  • superficial relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • emotional warmth
  • tactile comfort
  • digital communication
  • digital divide
  • internet censorship
  • global connectivity
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