Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Life
is never simple ups and downs always come in
life
. There is a view that people should accept an unwanted
situation
like a bad incident, a job without satisfaction or lack of money over others who has strong arguments that never try to adjust to situations but try to effort to come out of the circumstances. I am a strong advocate to face the
situation
and improve it. It is obvious that in everyone's
life
there is a tough
situation
with lots of problems but to accept it is not the right solution. Since It will always keep you on the defined premises, you can not think about the development. Whereas if you are ready to break the boundary
then
there will be always a new hope to change the status of
life
.
For example
, if right brother would never think about flying in the sky
then
no one can reach the sky today. So always put your best endeavour to transform the
situation
with positive hope. People always try to adopt an easy way for their
life
as it is said and well proved by Newton that object always wants to be in inertia so if there is a difficult time we never want to change it and we generally adapt with the
situation
. For eg. Dhoni a famous cricketer who had the job of ticket collector if he thought that he should go with that
then
, he could not be one of the best cricketers. So I always favour
to
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instinct for changing the
situation
.
Life
takes a test with the difficult situations if you cope with circumstances and move with them.
Then
there could not be any invention or discovery in
this
world or no one will be the best. Everyone will be an average person if adaptation is the only option but heroes always come after crossing the hardest part of the race.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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