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Some people think that new technology always improve the lives of workers. Other people believe that it results in disadvantages for workers. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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The pros and cons of
technology
has
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 been a popular topic of discussion since the rise of the Internet. But to me, I believe that the adoption of
technology
 carries far greater advantages than disadvantages. One prominent argument for the use of
technology
 is the increase in the efficiency and productivity of the
workers
. Today,
workers
 are spoilt for choices with the large array of productivity apps available.
Such
 apps
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 tasks/calendar apps to track schedules and deadlines, Zoom and Teams Meet to conduct meetings over the internet, and powerful search engines like Google to supplement and empower
workers
 with ready knowledge.
Such
 is the power of
technology
 where it unlocks the potential and time of the worker to focus on things that are more important.
Technology
 poses a threat for the
workers
 as it threatens to replace their usefulness. It is
common
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 discussion about which
jobs
 will be replaced by AI and
technology
 and the consensus is
the
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 repetitive and
labourous
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laborious
 work like cashier, manufacturing lines, and even customer service can be
be
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replaced.
Technology
 threatens the livelihood of
such
workers
. Automated cashiering machines are already widely adopted and utilized, especially in large supermarkets with the prevalence of self-checkout stations.
Thus
, from
this
 perspective, it is disadvantageous for the worker.
However
, advancement in
technology
 has
also
 created a huge demand and the rise of other
jobs
such
 as software engineers, cyber security, and data analytics. Yes,
technology
 has replaced and will continue to replace certain
jobs
, but it has
also
 introduced demand and the creation of new
jobs
 to continue
this technological advancements
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. In conclusion, I believe that
technology
 serves to improve the lives of
the
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worker. But I do acknowledge that there are groups of
workers
 who are negatively impacted by
this
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inadvertent
advent
in advent
 adoption of
technology
. The wide adoption of
technology
 today speaks
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 with regards to its advantages and disadvantages for the
workers
.
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