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the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
#information #ages #populations #yemen #projections
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The pie chart shows the statistical percentage of the different ranges of ages in 2002 and predicts the changes in 2050 in
Yemen
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 and Italy. In 2002, 50.1% of
people
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 aged 0~14 were the largest population in
Yemen
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,
whereas
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 14.3% of
people
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 aged 0~14 were the smallest in Italy. The age of 15~59 took 46.3% and 61.6% in
Yemen
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 and Italy.
However
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, over 60
years
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 old
people
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 were in little position in both countries. Forecast five decades later, over 60
years
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 old
people
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 will be tripled in size in
Yemen
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 and Italy. The percentage rise from 46.3 to 57.3
of
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in
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 15~59
years
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 old in
Yemen
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.
In contrast
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, in Italy, the population of 15~59
years
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 old will dwindle to 46.2%.
Moreover
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, in
Yemen
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 and Italy, the age of 0~14 will increase to 5.7% and 11.5%.
To sum up
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, the birth rate is more important in the two countries.
Also
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, the
people
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 aged
of
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apply
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15~59
that
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who
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working
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work
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 to maintain the stability of the national economy always be the prodigious
number of
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apply
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population.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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