the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie chart shows the statistical percentage of the different ranges of ages in 2002 and predicts the changes in 2050 in
Yemen
and Italy.
In 2002, 50.1% of people
aged 0~14 were the largest population in Yemen
, whereas
14.3% of people
aged 0~14 were the smallest in Italy. The age of 15~59 took 46.3% and 61.6% in Yemen
and Italy. However
, over 60 years
old people
were in little position in both countries.
Forecast five decades later, over 60 years
old people
will be tripled in size in Yemen
and Italy. The percentage rise from 46.3 to 57.3 of
15~59 Change preposition
in
years
old in Yemen
. In contrast
, in Italy, the population of 15~59 years
old will dwindle to 46.2%. Moreover
, in Yemen
and Italy, the age of 0~14 will increase to 5.7% and 11.5%.
To sum up
, the birth rate is more important in the two countries. Also
, the people
aged of
15~59 Change preposition
apply
that
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who
working
to maintain the stability of the national economy always be the prodigious Wrong verb form
work
number of
population.Correct quantifier usage
apply
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