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The given bar graph indicates the
percentage
 of residents’ fresh and instant café purchasing and having it out in 4
last
 weeks in five
cities
 (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
, Hobart) in Australia. Overall, it is evident that people preferred to have
coffee
 and tea out in all
cities
, except in
Adelaide
.
In addition
, the
percentage
people
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of people
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 buying instant
coffee
 is higher than those who bought fresh
coffee
. According to the chart, it is evident while the
percentage
 of drinking tea and
coffee
 in Sydney was about 61%,
the
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Melbourne’s was slightly higher at about 63%.
However
, there was a close tendency to buy instant
coffee
 between 42% to 48%, both
cities
 showed less tendency for buying fresh
coffee
 in Sydney and Melbourne which the per cents were around 44% and respectively.
The
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 remained
cities
, the largest proportion belongs to drinking out in Hobart at 63%, which is followed by Brisbane at 56%,
then
Adelaide
, under 50 per cent.
Finally
, a close similarity can be seen in the
percentage
 of those buying fresh
coffee
 in Brisbane and
Adelaide
 at around 34%, while Hobart’s figure was slightly higher by the number of 38%.
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