Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Using the advertised

goods

are overtaking the markets than the actual needs of the community for it.

This

essay totally agrees with that statement because

people

are more

in to

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into

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showing off and depending on the

goods

as

a daily necessities

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a daily necessity

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. Buying

goods

by

people

that are popular in markets just to show off is one reason

of

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high sales. They think that having

such

goods

with them shows greater and rich in their squad and community eyes. And they tend to buy more though they have no use of it on a

daipy

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daily

basis.

For example

, Bullion markets in Nepal really

hits

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during

popular

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the popular

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festival

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festivals

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and ceremonies like Teej and marriage respectively. Another reason

of

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apply

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why advertised

goods

are giving higher positive outcomes is by making

it

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them

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as

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apply

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a

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apply

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daily

necessities

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necessity

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. Without having knowledge behind it,

people

are using

unconsciously

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it unconsciously

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. Just by watching promotions

doing

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done

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by their

favourote

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favourite

celebraties

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celebrities

in

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on

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the television, they tend to buy it.

For example

, Patanjali products like

colgate

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Colgate

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and soaps

has

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became

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necessities for the majority of

people

after its launch done by great Yoga Master Balkrishna Ramdev. In conclusion,

attraction

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the attraction

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of consumers towards advertised products have

outweighs

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outweighed

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the actual

society

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society's

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needs

from

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that

goods

.

This

facination

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fascination

has become popular due to showing off nature of

people

these days and

relying

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onrelying

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as a basic needs without enough information behind that particular

goods

.