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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trians between cities. Others belive the money should be spent on improving exiting public transport.

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It is always argued that governments should spend more money on some situations than others. Especially about
transportation
. Some
people
 think it is necessary to spend a large proportion of the budget on constructing new railway lines between cities, while others believe that money should spend on improving our common public transport system. In fact, in my point of view, governments should be more concerned about public
transportation
 which is used in everyday life.
To begin
 with, in today's modern world, time is like gold.
People
 spend most of their time on traffic and or crowded vehicles so governments need to improve city transporting system or include new
trains
 with modern facilities to make the city travelling easier for citizens to use them to get to their workplace or other destinations.
As a result
, more
people
 will be encouraged to use public
transportation
 and it will help to solve traffic and pollution problems in the urban environment.
On the other hand
, the new railway line system is
also
 important in travelling between the cities. Fast
trains
 with high equipment can improve travelling pleasure so it can cause to increase the number of
people
 choosing
trains
 to travel.
However
 in my opinion, if we want to travel fast we have more options to choose from rather than
trains
.
For example
, travelling by aeroplane can be a better idea if it is important to travel fast. In conclusion, our daily life travels in our cities are more important because we spent our time and energy on it every day so we need more budget to spend on improving public
transportation
.
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