IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 8

You have borrowed a book from your professor and returned it late write a letter to him why you delayed in returning the book and how useful the book was.

#book #professor
Dear Sir My name is Joe and currently enrolling in the commerce section of our university. The reason for writing
this
 letter is to express confess regarding not being able to return your
book
 in the stipulated time. For the purpose of the seminar, I took a
book
 on the modern economy from you prior to that. But I am unable to hand over the
book
 to you. As the seminar was over, received the news of my grandfather passed away. Immediately I rushed toward there
consequently
 spent 10-12 days in my hometown. As I reached here realized that need to return your
book
 to you so that other students can acquire knowledge. I feel too guilty just because
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
my mistake in
this
 scenario happen. I will make sure that in future it will not happen again. As a matter of fact,
this
book
 provides me with depth knowledge of the economy and clarify some doubts related to it.
This
 action was responsible for winning the seminar's
first
 prize.
This
 is happen just because of you and the
book
 that you gave me. Again sorry for handover your
book
 late. I hope you will forgive me. Thanks Regards, Joe
Submitted by akshay.thakare2804 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: