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the plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

#plans #site #airport #redevelopment #year
The pictures of the Southwest
Airport
 plan illustrate the recent directory and future development plan after renovating
next
 year. It can be clearly seen the number of replaced areas and expanding location. The most noticeable change is the larger size of the
airport
 on the north side, included with 18 gates which
is
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 extra than now occurring at 8 gates. The passenger corridors will be replaced by sky train stations in the middle of the new
airport
 north wing.
Furthermore
, the entrance on both departures and arrivals will be constructed for more convenient accessibility.
Meanwhile
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 the security passport control and customs department are situated in the particular location, you can shop before going to the gates after checking through security passport control in the future
airport
.
Moreover
, the airline’s check-in rows are available at the front of the security passport control side,
although
 the existed one will be transferred from
left
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the left
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 to
right
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the right
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 corner . Passengers
also
 drop their belongings in the baggage area
at
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on
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 the opposite side of the new check-in area. According to the
airport
 facilities, the
next
 generation of
airport
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airports
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 presents various places to support travellers,
for instance
, cafe, ATM machines and car rental in the arrival wing.
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