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Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned andshold not pay tax to the state. Do you agree and disagree?

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Irrefutably in
this
 contemporary epoch, people are working hard to earn a good living.
Nonetheless
, many think that they should save all their earnings for themselves without paying their
taxes
 to the
country
. I strongly disagree with
this
 rubric and
this
 essay would shed light on the valid standpoints that why one should pay their
taxes
 in the consequent paragraphs On one hand,
taxes
 play a crucial role in a
country
's economy. If someone avoids paying
taxes
, the
government
 confronts many problems relating to the services for their citizen.
For instance
, most of the
government related
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 sectors like public transportation, hospitals, schools, administration and construction of roads functions with the
taxes
 which are obtained from their
citizens
.
Thus
 failing to pay
taxes
 will greatly affect the growth of the
country
.
However
, the
taxes
 are collected based on the wage scales in many countries. It is hard for the low waged individual to pay fixed or high
taxes
, which is why most
of
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the
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people try to avoid submitting their
taxes
. To exemplify, a survey
form
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from
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 a bestselling newspaper “The Hindu" stated that in India , only 50 % of the working
citizens
 paid their
taxes
, as there
was
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 no proper slab rates benefitting their
citizens
 in 2019.
On the other hand
, the
government
 of each
country
 should take responsibility to spend their citizen's
taxes
 wisely and not
to
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misuse
it
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them
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.
Taxes
 spent on public
benefit
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 will lure all the
citizens
 to pay their
taxes
 without fail.
For example
, in Canada, people pay their
taxes
 regularly and in
return
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 they are provided with free education, medical and many other amenities by their
government
.
Thus
 resulting in the prosperity of their
country
. In the final reckoning, I tend to reiterate my opinion that it is
a
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 duty of every working individual to pay their
taxes
.
Although
,
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 many try to avoid their
taxes
 because of their dissatisfaction with their
government
, they should be penalized for
such
 acts. Yet there are other
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law-abiding
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law
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 abiding
citizens
 who contribute and
creating
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 revenue for the betterment of their
country
.
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