Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The field of farming is continuously improved thanks to
science
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progress
that is
responsible
about
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numerous benefits. It is tough to deny
this
claim, indeed, it is one of the major areas which has undergone a large number of
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across
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history, for ancient times. Scientific evolution guarantees the use of up-date techniques that contribute to the qualities of products and help to simplify agriculture activities in times terms. It is undeniable that the
improving
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of farming consent to avoid the import of many products,
consequently
, is positive for economic reasons.
In addition
, the development of new studies permits the construction of modern facilities which allow quicker production in a new uncomplicated way. To my way of thinking, it is evident as a quality of life, thanks to
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of farming, is grown. Nowadays, on contrary
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the past, an enormous variety of products, linked by farming, are available. For
this
reason, the
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is
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and so, the profit is going up
in contrast
to past times. Another crucial advantage is that fresh technologies contribute to a
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decline
of
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pollution
instead
of old-fashioned methods
such
as using
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carbon. Indeed, today many facilities prefer to use renewable energies. To conclude, I strongly believe that scientific developments
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had a fundamental role in
agriculture
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field. At the same time, I think that sometimes people tend to exploit many territories to make
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and so, to product to
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level, they forget an essential thing: it is necessary to respect lands to obtain successful results.
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