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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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In the modern technology world, solar
energy
 has been popular to
using
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 for
dewelling
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dwelling
 activities by
the
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most
of
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individuals. Which is one of
resourse
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resource
fron
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from
 natural to convert as
an
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energy
 by using modern inventions.
This
 essay will discuss both advantages and
disasvantages
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disadvantages
. Because of lacking other natural energies, scientists were invented solar
energy
 to get power from the sun. Which is
remarkable
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 invention without harming
an
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 environment to obtain from
natural
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.
Thats
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That's
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 why it has been famous among developing countries.
Firstly
, people could be used for long-term basis
therefore
 which will be
cost effective
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 method rather than other methods
such
 as fuel,gas and coal. If
public
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 can able to install solar
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panels
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pannels
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panels
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them self
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themself
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 for daily electricity usage
then
government
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the government
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 will not require to allocate additional budget to utilise
current
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 for their citizen.
Although
 it will environmental friendly and will not harm to eco-system. Another factor to consider is
maintenance
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 of
installed
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 system, the more householders do not know much knowledge about the exact methods to clean, the greater impact on long-term usage. Because of lack of knowledge about how does panel
clean
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 ? because of
unknown
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the unknown
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 proper way of washing solar
pannels
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panels
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 can be
dameged
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damaged
 or broken. In other fact
capital
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 cost of installation is huge rather than other
utilities
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 connection. If owners do not use
for
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 many years, it will not profit to them. Weather condition is another
facyor
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factor
 to get
continous
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continuous
energy
otherwise
 it will not
cost effective
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. Into consideration, nations have been using as a
suplementary
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supplementary
 way to get power by using solar
energy
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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