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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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In the modern technology world, solar energy has been popular to use for dwelling activities by most individuals. Which is one of resource from natural to convert as a strength by using modern inventions.
This
 essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages. Because of lacking other natural energies, scientists were invented solar energy to get power from the sun. Which is a remarkable invention without harming the environment to obtain from nature.
That is
 why it has been famous among developing countries.
Firstly
, people could be used for long-term basis
therefore
 which will be cost-effective method rather than other methods
such
 as fuel, gas and coal. If the public can able install solar panels themselves for daily electricity usage,
then
 the government will not require to allocate additional budget to utilize current for their citizen.
Although
 it will environmentally friendly and will not harm to eco-system. Another factor to consider is the maintenance of the installed system, the more householders do not know much knowledge about the exact methods to clean, the greater impact on long-term usage. Because of lack of knowledge about how does panel is clean? because of the unknown proper ways of washing solar panels can be damaged or broken. In another
fact
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 the capital cost of installation is huge rather than other utility connections. If owners do not use it for many years, it will not profit to them. Weather condition is another factor to get continuous power
otherwise
 it will not be cost-effective. Into consideration, nations have been using it as a supplementary way to get power by using solar energy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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