Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. how true do you think this statement is? what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars

It is argued that the main cause of

traffic

jam

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in many cities in the world is due to the amount of

car

ownership

which has increased so fast during the past thirty years. In my view, I suppose to say it is certainly true because people tend to use their own transport to commute.

First

of all, the increasing amount of

car

ownership

was caused by the payment system that the dealers gave. The most favourite way to pay is annually payment per month. In Indonesia, someone who wants to buy a motorcycle or

car

just need to bring her identification card to process the instal payment, which is so easy.

Consequently

, the

traffic

jam

in Indonesia, especially in the capital city, Jakarta, is out of control.

However

, the government should take some actions to reduce

traffic

jam

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,

such

as increasing the tax for

car

ownership

and adding more public transportation. People will think twice when they want to buy a

car

, and

as a

result

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most of them would prefer to go somewhere by bus, commuter line, or any other public transportations due to the lower price. At the end of the time, the

traffic

jam

would gradually decrease. In conclusion, the big

traffic

jam

in many cities is caused by the rising

of

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car

ownership

. Even though the dealers offer

the

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affordable price, people obviously would re-think about

to have

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one if the government increase the tax and choose

using

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public transportation to commute.