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Nowadays, many natural places are damaged by people who keep throwing their garbage. what are the causes ? How can this be solved?

In recent times, many
people
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damp
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dump
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 their
wastes
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 in the environment
thus
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 destroying it.
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 is usually
due
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 the fact that
people
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 have
no where
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nowhere
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 to throw the rubbish and often times are not taught
on
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the
importance
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 of damping in
bins
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. In
this
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 issue and offer solutions.
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 and foremost, the causes of
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people
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people's
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garbage
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 in the environment are as follows. Many individuals damp their
wastes
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 anywhere they wish because of
inadequate
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an inadequate
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 number of available
bins
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 in their locality.
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,
people
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may be
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maybe
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may be
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 willing to follow the right channel of
waste
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 disposal but if they are not provided with what to use, they resort to habits of throwing
garbage
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 anywhere
thus
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 damaging the surroundings.
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, in a community of more than 1000
people
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 who needs more than 14
bins
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 in order to rightly dispose
off
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of
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 their
wastes
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 are often supplied with 5
bins
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 that fill up too quickly resulting in
people
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 having nowhere else to throw.
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 in itself accounts for more than 50 per cent of the damage done to the environment.
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, the reason why
people
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 opt to throw
garbage
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 anywhere rather than in the
bins
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 is
because
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that
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 they lack sufficient knowledge on the
importance
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 of doing so. To put
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 in perspective, a lot of
people
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 do not understand the dangers of
garbage
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 to the
enviroment
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environment
 and
thus
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 damp things in ignorance.
Nonetheless
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, there are solutions to these problems.
These
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 includes governments providing enough
bins
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 to the communities.
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, in order to accord
people
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 more chances of
disposing
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 their
wastes
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 properly, the governing
authorites
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authorities
 should provide
bins
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 in proportion to the number of residents in a given community so that everyone can have enough space to
dispose
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waste
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. The
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secondly
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 solution involves the use of media to sensitize
people
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 on the
importance
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 of proper
waste
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 disposal and on the dangers of improper
waste
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 disposal. Take,
for instance
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, in a survey conducted on the effects of sensitization campaigns on
people
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's
behavour
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behaviour
 towards
garbage
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 disposal, it was proved that more than 90 per cent of
people
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's
mindset
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mindsets
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 changed for the better regarding
waste
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 disposal.
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 proves how effective
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holding rallies to sensitize individuals can be. By way of conclusion, many
people
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 throw their
garbage
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 just anywhere because they do not understand the
importance
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 of using the right method and are usually not supplied with enough
bins
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 to
dispose
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 in.
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 to combat these problems, the government should conduct campaigns to sensitize
people
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 on the goodness of proper
waste
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 disposal and provide sufficient
bins
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 in
propotion
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proportion
 to the number of
people
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 living in a particular area.

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