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Thanks to the development of science and technology, the lifestyle have become more and more similar across the World. Do you think it is positive or negative development .

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Recently, we have witnessed too many kinds of
development
 and improvement of levels in serval areas like
technology
 and science, that have been more developed in a different side. which impact directly the lifestyle of people around the
world
. There are serval opinions about
this
 subject, which I believe is interesting and have a positive impact in the life in general.
First
 of all, it is said that science has become 50 times more developed in the recent 10 years in comparison to the same period in 2000, which approved
for example
 by the time that the scientists had to create a new vaccine for Covid19.
moreover
, we have the
development
 of more than five types of vaccine across the
world
, which is impressive if we make a comparison about the same request but in 2000, as a
,
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result we can confirm that the people across the
world
 received a similar same type of treatment.
Furthermore
 , serval studies attest that the quality of the life of human beings has been developed during the
last
 period after the introduction of new
technology
 in their lives ,
such
 as the robot in the operation room who helped the doctors avoid many hours of work and reduce the risk of losing the patient because of the huge time spent in the operation room.
On the other hand
, there is a black side of the
technology
, and the most commune example of the
development
 of the
technology
 is the use of mobile phones, which is become an identical lifestyle around the
world
 , since people becoming identical in terms of the use of same
technology
 and same mobile phones,
such
 as the brand of apple. In summary , it is undeniable that we have a positive and negative
side
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 to the
development
 of sciences and
technology
 , but I am confident that we can have a better lifestyle with the presence of
this
technology
 that can be the key to a better quality of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convergence
  • globalization
  • interconnected
  • homogeneous
  • phenomenon
  • cultural identity
  • diversity
  • global tapestry
  • dominant global culture
  • consumerism
  • environmental implications
  • resource depletion
  • sustainable
  • uniform habits
  • climate change
  • standardization
  • health and safety standards
  • medical care
  • food safety
  • life expectancies
  • quality of life
  • mobility
  • integration
  • expatriates
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