Thanks to the development of science and technology, the lifestyle have become more and more similar across the World. Do you think it is positive or negative development .

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Recently, we have witnessed too many kinds of

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and improvement of levels in serval areas like

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and science, that have been more developed in a different side. which impact directly the lifestyle of people around the

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. There are serval opinions about

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subject, which I believe is interesting and have a positive impact in the life in general.

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of all, it is said that science has become 50 times more developed in the recent 10 years in comparison to the same period in 2000, which approved

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by the time that the scientists had to create a new vaccine for Covid19.

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, we have the

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of more than five types of vaccine across the

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, which is impressive if we make a comparison about the same request but in 2000, as a

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result we can confirm that the people across the

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received a similar same type of treatment.

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, serval studies attest that the quality of the life of human beings has been developed during the

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period after the introduction of new

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in their lives ,

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as the robot in the operation room who helped the doctors avoid many hours of work and reduce the risk of losing the patient because of the huge time spent in the operation room.

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, there is a black side of the

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, and the most commune example of the

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of the

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is the use of mobile phones, which is become an identical lifestyle around the

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, since people becoming identical in terms of the use of same

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and same mobile phones,

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as the brand of apple. In summary , it is undeniable that we have a positive and negative

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to the

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of sciences and

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, but I am confident that we can have a better lifestyle with the presence of

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technology

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that can be the key to a better quality of life.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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globalization
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cultural identity
diversity
global tapestry
dominant global culture
consumerism
environmental implications
resource depletion
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climate change
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Thanks to the development of science and technology, the lifestyle have become more and more similar across the World. Do you think it is positive or negative development .

Fully explain your ideas

Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Describe one or two leadership, community and/or learning & development activities that you have engaged in.

Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With traffic jams and pollution increasing every year in big cities, some people say that public transport should be free in big cities to help reduce these problems which are caused by cars.To what extent do you agree or disagree?