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Some parents send their children to preschool when they are three or four years old. Other parents wait until their children are old enough for primary school before they send them to school. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of sending children to preschool at a young age.

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 of preschool once their offspring have reached particular
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 meanwhile others prefer to send their kids to regular
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 at the
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 of six or seven years old. It is definitely a controversial topic.
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 that the earlier a child starts to develop than better. So, possible pros and cons will be considered in the essay below. On the one hand, adults who choose their children to go to the prep
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 clearly care about them in the long term. Obviously,
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 an approach has a huge benefit for future adults. According to a study, kids at
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 from 3 to 5
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 new information and knowledge very easily like a
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 why three or four years old might be the best period for starting childrens' learning.
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, individuals who make a decision
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 can encounter a bold con. Mostly, preschool is
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 service. A survey has shown that for an average family in Russia
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 a type of preparation for just one kid costs approximately 15% of a monthly income. Unfortunately, it significantly decreases the budget that takes
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 on the quality of a family's life. To conclude, needless to say, there is an evident benefit for future students if they have a specific preparation before primary
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 and writing, instilling responsibility and accuracy from
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Nonetheless
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 education is quite costly for regular parents which might influence their stability.

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