In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of advertisements which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys, and other goods. Parents often claim that these ads are unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Although

it has been pointed out by some that the number of

commercials

aiming

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at young

children

has been increasing nowadays, which is beneficial to

children

’s development, other people argue that it is unfair to tempt a child to purchase products by advertising. Personally, I completely agree with the latter idea as creating more and more

advertisements

to attract young individuals to buy items will bring a health problem. On the one hand, some individuals suggest increasing the number of

advertisements

targeting younger generations can widen their horizons.

This

is because those

commercials

are designed carefully by professional designers in order to promote goods whose ways of expression are unique and fascinating. Watching these

advertisements

is a great way for

children

to learn a wide range of means to present their ideas and feelings, which encourages them to think outside the box,

thus

cultivating creative thinking.

For example

, in China, a primary school student who won the winner of a clothing design competition by creating a plastic dress told journalists that her idea came from a

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commercial, which included a robot wearing a plastic coat.

On the other hand

, other people, including me, opine that putting a significant majority of

commercials

that target

children

is harmful to their physical conditions. The reason is that those who are nearly ten years old are unable to distinguish between

commercials

and real products, as they have not become mature mentally and emotionally. If they watch a lot of

advertisements

presenting unhealthy food,

such

as chocolate and chips, which

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a high level of sugar and less nutrition, they are more likely to ask their parents to buy.

As a result

, eating too many unhealthy snacks makes young

children

more likely to get several illnesses.

For instance

, a vast proportion of parents who always are pestered to purchase snacks state that their sons or daughters are facing digestive issues as they are used to having more oily chips that are promoted on TV. In conclusion, people may vary in their opinion about whether it is fair to put an increasing percentage of

commercials

targeting young generations or not,

while

I am of the opinion that

this

is a dreadful situation as it is detrimental to a child’s physical well-being.