Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: – Your reason for writing – What you like about the restaurant – Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.

#favourite #restaurant #reason #suggestions #improvement

Dear sir, I am writing you

this

letter in connection

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unforgetable

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unforgettable

experience at your

restaurent

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restaurant

. My birthday usually falls on

13th

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the 13th

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of Dec and

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last

month I had a great time there celebrating it with my family members.

First

and foremost, I would highly appreciate the

top class

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services being provided by your staff. I feel so delighted to get my family members at yours on

such

a special

occassion

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occasion

.Apart from that as always there were

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plenty of food items included in your menu which I do not think I could find anywhere in our town. I ordered

couple

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a couple

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of items out of the menu along with my birthday cake. The food items were so delicious that

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made everyone's day sitting there. The light

romentic

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romantic

background music gives you a pleasant feel and relaxation.

However

, there are

couple

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of things

which

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that

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requires more attention from your side. As I observe, there is less number of table available to customers as some customers have to wait outside the

restaurent

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restaurant

to get their turn. As we know waiting for any customer

being

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the

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difficult task.

Besides

, there should be a little improvement in your lighting system. As per my ,

observation

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I felt there should be extra light to put on so that visibility inside the

restaurent

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restaurant

could be increased.

This

is the one of

best

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place

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places

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which I would love to come

repeatedly

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. Yours faithfully, Mark.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

239 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Write a letter to your favourite restaurant. Include the following: – Your reason for writing – What you like about the restaurant – Suggestions for improvement. Write at least 150 words.

without capital punishement our lives are less secure and crime of violence increase.capital punishment is essential to control violence in society

In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

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