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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As
climate
change
 shows its effect massively in recent years, people starts to argue that we can find a way to live with it. I totally disagree with
this
 opinion, we do have some time to prevent the effect to get worse, but we will not be able to live with it if we still live the same way as we did recently. There are numerous steps that we could take to prevent
climate
change
, individually or with the help of the government.
First
, we indeed should start to
change
 our lifestyle to be green people. If doing 3R (reduce, reuse, recycle) seems complicated, we can contribute by using the “less” formula.
For example
, use less plastic, buy fewer clothes, or earn less waste.
Secondly
, government and employers could start their action by introducing a new green movement law.
Such
 as ruling the companies to reduce carbon dioxide emissions to tackle the global warming to get worse.
Furthermore
, citizens could
also
 contribute by selecting the company that has already started their green movement and choosing them only. On another hand, without doing any actions, it will be nearly impossible to live with the effect of
climate
change
. There will be various disasters that may happen in the
next
 20 years if we do not
change
 our lifestyle.
For example
, the increased sea level will cause flooding for some cities around the world, and one of them must be Jakarta. I strongly believe that everyone will be struggling to live in the flood for a long period of time.
Consequently
, the possibility to suffer during the disaster is massive rather than living a new lifestyle sooner. In conclusion, it is clear to me that we should start the actions to tackle
climate
change
 rather than living with it without doing anything.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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