Some people think that sport has an important role in society. Others think it is only a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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We can not deny that our lifestyle has changed in the
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few decades and nowadays a lot of people become more aware of the benefits of practising sport.
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others believe that there is just a small group of persons who is interested in doing
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activity. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the gym has plentiful pros for all members of the community.
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and foremost, practising one kind of sports in a regular way helps a lot to keep good physical health for a long time even we become elder persons since it aids people keeping fit and living without chronic illnesses. In today's
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every person may develop many diseases like obesity due to the daily consumption of fast food by workers. For that giving time for walking or cycling is become a necessity for our well-being. A survey conveys that exercising twice a week makes people younger than their real age.
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, playing sport is the best option for maintaining good mental health due to its several benefits to our brain.
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, it aids many individuals who suffer from psychological disorders
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as anxiety and depression to recover their comfort and balance for living a happy life.
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, my uncle has suffered from depression for 5 years and he used to take medications ,
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he didn't notice any progress until he started running twice a week,
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he overcame successfully
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experience and stopped all drugs. To sum up, I am still convinced that playing sport in our free time or adding
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activity to our lifestyle is very essential regarding its huge pros for the well-being of citizens and communities.
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