Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples form you knowledge or experience.

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pacing

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for a few and a loss for some

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. In

such

a way, supermarkets or

marts

are increasing day by day irrespective of the economy of a particular place, which is putting a difficult situation for local business communities, small shops etc, who depend on their daily wage income. I partially agree

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the statement regards to the close of small markets due to supermarts. In

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points and possible analogies.

To begin

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how the roaring incline of

marts

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been installed in every country despite

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. Earlier, I have mentioned my statement describing my partial agreement. Primarily, the main agenda is, when compared to the past, we have arisen to a world where

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task has become possible because of technology,

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the rapid increase of these

marts

can be a closure the local markets. My reasons mainly constitute to the comparison of prices and the discounts allowed in

marts

as the product is being exchanged within two hands.

However

, when we talk about local shops, it's different as the process of distribution of the product is done in a chain manner.

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point is how a mart has A-Z products from Edible items to electronic goods. With

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all these reasons, from my experience when I have visited Nepal a couple of years, I have observed there are

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higher number of local shops than

marts

which was surreal. When we enquired the reason behind it from local shop merchants,

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answer was, no matter what comes for our way of competition we always rise with respect and love we give to customers whom we believe as our god's. In a nutshell,

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a lot of things are changing

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a few ethics remained

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which can be a scope for markets to not be

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dead end.