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Mobile phone usage is held responsible for a lot of medical, social and technical problems. What forms do these problems take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the advantages offered by mobile phones? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Mobile
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The mobile
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phone
 is an important gadget for human
being
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beings
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 nowadays. It can not be denied that mobile
phone
 plays an important role
for
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in
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 human living. It can be both useful and
also
 harmful for
people
 in both medical, social or technical problems. Certainly,
this
agruement
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agreement
argument
 had both agree and disagree
point
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points
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 which will be described in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached. On the one hand, it can not be
denined
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denied
defined
 that mobile
phone
 is harmful
for
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to
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 human
,
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 if that person
are
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is
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 not using a mobile
phone
 in
an
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a
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 useful or correct way. Mobile
phone
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phones
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 contain UV light which might be harmful
for
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to
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 the eye or the signal which might be harmful
for
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to
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 their brain or even by using
to
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too
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 much mobile
phone
 can cause aches on their hands and finger. Using
to
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too
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much
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many
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 mobile
phone
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phones
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 can
also
 cause a social problem. Many
people
 are facing a problem when they meet new
people
 in person as they
also
 talk to
people
 online which they might not need to care of their image as they should.
On the other hand
,
with
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a balance in using a mobile
phone
 will provide more advantages to the user
more
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than being a harmful device. Mobile
phone
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phones
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 contain plenty of good information. It allows
people
 to easier store notes and pictures and
also
 to communicate with other
people
 from a long distance easily. To summarize
,
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 can be agreed that mobile
phone
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phones
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 can cause a problem for the user.
However
, in my opinion,
mobile
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a mobile
the mobile
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phone
 can be more useful than harmful if the person is using the mobile
phone
 in the correct way.
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