Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.

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some think that nowadays we have too many choices, I agreed with that statement.

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, because the main aim from the companies

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the desires of everyone in order to increase their income,

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; because the new trend is the personalization of the products in order to fit with

consumers

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necessities and,

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; because there are many ways to buy goods and services that make easier the

consumer

experience.

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the desires and the necessities of everyone to get a bigger share market, food is one of the most representatives’ cases in which the offer is huge and adjust to the needs of everyone.

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, from my own experience I should have healthy eating habits

such

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sugar free

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and nowadays is easier to find a variety of pizzas made of almond flour that allows

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to conserve

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my healthy diet. More so, the market tends to a high level of customization of the goods, and it allows us to find the option that best fit

with

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our necessities.

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illustrate that, some known brands like Nike

who

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offers the possibility to label the clothes with the name of the

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costumer

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.

Furthermore

,

consumer

experience is now the main issue for the companies

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are offering different ways to purchase

such

as buying on the internet or at the store always highlighting the feelings of the

consumer

in the journey of purchase.

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amazon

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is given the best delivery services for every kind of good. In conclusion,

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consumer

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not only

have

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many choices but

also

many ways to choose which allows us

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all that we want, and

we

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need freely.