Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Presently, governments spend a large of money on

arts

schemes,

such

as music, plays or theatre while spending

few

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propotions

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proportions

promotions

on public services. In

this

essay, I will discuss the elements

both

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of them and give my opinion. In my country, Thailand, some people believe that some kind of

arts

like traditional plays should be conserved for the new generation of

kid

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kids

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. Because of these days,

children

are forgetting it more frequently due to the fact that a diversity of foreign culture which has affected enormously to young people.

In other words

,

children

nowadays are obviously addicted to

korean

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drama and k-pop songs. They tend to pattern the concept of the

korean

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lifestyle,

for example

, more

children

opt to

comsume

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consume

korean

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products

instead

of their own country. On the other

hands

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, the government decided to invest the money in public services as they should. It is still a controversial topic introducing heavy debate nowadays that the bus should be served all over the country, not only in the capital. It brings

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hardships to people when they need to travel somewhere, especially to the hospital, I have been told about

this

problem many times by my friends from the countryside.

Moreover

, a

well

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education system

that

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is not accessible to everyone if you’re poor. Most

children

in

the

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rural area did not get

an

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appropriate schooling because the government

adandons

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abandons

to support and enhance their life. In conclusion, traditional

arts

or any kinds of

arts

, both of them are crucial.

However

, the quality of life of the citizen is more way important. The government should pay attention more

on

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tangible things rather than intangible ones.