Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney college of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sofia Castillo a high school student from Bogota,Colombia.

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of all, I am writing to request a copy of my reports and assignment from the course I took

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year at the Sydney College of Australia.

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, I would like to know a way to get that paperwork. At the moment, I am applying for a new job. The employer has asked for these reports and it is very important for me to have them soon. Due to the fact that I am in Colombia and it is quite impossible for me to ask for them in person.

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, I tried to search online if I could get them in my college account. But my student code expired and I have no more access to it anymore.

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, I talked to the faculty secretary on the phone and she advised me to contact you. Having these papers would allow me to continue in the hiring process and it is a prove of the training I got in Australia. I would really appreciate it if you could help by sending me these documents through my email. If you need any personal information for

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process, I would be able to provide it anytime. Andrea Barreto

Submitted by Andrea Barreto on Mon Feb 28 2022

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

211 words

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Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney college of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.

Fully explain your ideas

Some companies blocks their employees from using social media and web sites such as facebook. Do you think managers should trust employees to use time wisely, or do you think it is smart of companies to blocks access to some sites? Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.

There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce. Among them, money is the most important factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Question：more students study abroad to learn new things today do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages？

Some people think that children should study formal learning at school as young as possible. Others believe they should not go to school until they are at least 7. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?