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Last year you attended a presentation skill course at the Sydney college of Australia. Your new employer has asked you to provide copies of your reports and assignments as quickly as possible.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sofia Castillo a high school student from Bogota,Colombia.
First
 of all, I am writing to request a copy of my reports and assignment from the course I took
last
 year at the Sydney College of Australia.
Also
, I would like to know a way to get that paperwork. At the moment, I am applying for a new job. The employer has asked for these reports and it is very important for me to have them soon. Due to the fact that I am in Colombia and it is quite impossible for me to ask for them in person.
First
, I tried to search online if I could get them in my college account. But my student code expired and I have no more access to it anymore.
Then
, I talked to the faculty secretary on the phone and she advised me to contact you. Having these papers would allow me to continue in the hiring process and it is a prove of the training I got in Australia. I would really appreciate it if you could help by sending me these documents through my email. If you need any personal information for
this
 process, I would be able to provide it anytime. Andrea Barreto
Submitted by Andrea Barreto on

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