We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future?

An extremely important topic today is related to human dependency on

computers

and other

technologies

. Even though

computers

are relatively new, they have become an indispensable part of modern lifestyles. I strongly believe that in the

next

years,

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society could suffer a

dramatical

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change in several critical areas,

as a result

of the growing dependency

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different digital technology.

To begin

with, there is no denying that

technologies

artefacts have really impacted the way we can communicate and relate, giving

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opportunity to connect instantaneously whit people of diverse

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of the planet, no matter the distance, language, time or age.

However

, despite the benefits of

this

, I strongly think that undeniable negative consequences have occurred. Many people, particularly the youngest, have developed an insane dependence

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their cellphones, iPad and other IT devices, especially when they need to communicate or express feelings, emotions or thoughts, and

this

is a deplorable consequence of modernity.

For example

, numerous teenagers in my country develop social skills problems or depression due to excessive use of

technologies

. It is

also

important to mention that

computers

and

technologies

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devices are facilitating the work in several areas.

For instance

, in the human resources field, the process of recruitment, evaluation and selection in an organization, could be done completely online through a program named AIRA.

This

example shows that certain advances that could not be possible without the fast pace development of

technologies

. Apparently, in the future, there will be more devices in our working environment and is believed that we should learn how to work with them. In conclusion, I believe

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humanity

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will probably become more dependent on

computers

,

nonetheless

, our lives will improve as

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technology improves. While there is a negative side to

such

a dependency, there are many more positives that we can focus on. For

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, it is necessary

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prepare

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for the changes in the human

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lifestyle

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life style

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lifestyle

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.