The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in2010. ( task 1, cam 13 test 1)
The diagrams demonstrate the layout of the entrance to a city hospital in 2007 and 3 years later.
It is clear that
the principal change is the development of transport infrastructure. The addition of a car park and the construction of a bus
station accompanied the improvement of the traffic system at the entrance of the hospital.
Looking at the map it is in 2010, we can see that there are two roundabouts located at the intersections of the hospital carriageway with the city road and ring road. Two ways to go to the bus
station were constructed to link to the roundabouts.
In 2007, six bus
stops were located along the two sides of the hospital carriageway, however
, they were replaced by a bus
station in
the west of the hospital road. By 2010, a new car park for residents was built in the east of the city hospital, Change preposition
on
therefore
, the original parking only was for the staff instead
of both as
Change preposition
in
the
past.Change preposition
in the
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