Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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setting can develop

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to grow up with

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quality of life , there are many promotive methods to make them smarter and could adapt themselves to the new surrounding peacefully. The schoolmates in the classroom can bring about the way how to live with other people in the sophisticated society. If one of

students

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are different from the others, they probably were perceived as unique persons, and the other

students

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prone

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to treat them differently

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common

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ones. Regarding

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bullying issues in the

school

setting, there are many relative causes of

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problem,

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disabled

children

, autism, mental illness and other conditions that made them look unfamiliar. Most of them could express something by teaching from parents or

school

teachers, and when somebody were bullied by their peers, we need to find more suitable solutions to make

this

problem varnished.

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, stress and peer pressure have some negative impacts

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the

students

‘learning performance. There are many problems from bullying from

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peers

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; being unconfident , aggressive or

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anger to the victim. If the

students

were bullied many

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such

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their minds and they could not concentrate enough

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their studies. I strongly suggest that attitude and behaviour changes could help the special

children

to get through as bullying victims. The teachers or the parents need to change their thoughts that everyone

are

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equal and the

children

need to respect

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each other. It is not only about changing their attitudes

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but it is

also

related to sharing and caring for their special friends. Importantly, a

school

teacher needs to be a good role model to treat the special

children

in a similar way and provide some opportunities for them to express what they feel and need. In conclusion, prevention of bullying in

school

is the most important method for

this

solution, the parents or the teachers need to encourage the

students

to see the equity in the humanities. People could be born from different conditions, but we need to give them more opportunities to live in our society happily with a good environment.