Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores.do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In
this
modern scenario,everyone is habituated to purchasing
products
from the internet
instead
of going to malls directly.I think
this
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optimistic trend in many views in terms of quality,durability and offers. To embark on,these days,online shopping has a profound influence on
people
's
life
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in a positive manner.The advancement in technology brings many amenities for
people
.
Firstly
,it has made
people
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life easier as they do not need to go out for
products
that they need because there are plenty of online apps
such
as Flipkart and Amazon,
therefore
individuals can buy easily through these apps.
Consequently
,it not only saves
people
's time but
also
ensures fresh items which
are came
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from directly manufactured companies.
Secondly
,it offers many discounts for individuals who are frequently took clothes from only one app.
For instance
,during the corona pandemic,
people
used to buy clothes and shoes from online websites by using electronic gadgets as our government declared the complete lockdown all over the country,so
this
is an example of using the internet facilitates many aspects
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everyone's life. On another hand,online shopping provides good quality and long-lasting
of
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materials compared to street shopping.
Although
this
phenomenon has advantages,there are
also
some negative impacts on
individual's
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entity .
Moreover
,sometimes
people
can receive a
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damage
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product because there is no
a
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prospect to check
item
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directly before
taking
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.
As a result
,the money might be wasted.
However
,there is
also
another facility to exchange our item with another one.
In addition
to
this
,some online
products
are fake related to brand and appearance.
For example
,even though the
products
are not in quality,
but
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they use to retail by keeping
a high brand names
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such
as Puma as well as Adidas. To conclude.
Although
this
phenomenon has drawbacks,there are
also
positive outcomes in terms of time saving and discounts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • landscape of retail
  • digital purchasing platforms
  • enhanced accessibility
  • mobility issues
  • competitive prices
  • brick-and-mortar stores
  • vibrant local economies
  • packaging waste
  • carbon footprint
  • social cohesion
  • community engagement
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