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Child’s development

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nowadays has been triggering some discussions about the

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, pop culture, and

friends

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in how kids react and think towards their surroundings. Apart from that, some people still set in their way that family plays the most significant role. As I have been observing

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the past years, I must say I totally agree that family is no longer the major

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due to several reasons. In essence, it has been believed that family is the

first

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school of

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children

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, as taught

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sociology books over the decades.

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, what they are seeing from their family, especially their parents, can be easily imitated in their daily behaviour.

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, if parents implement

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strict rules,

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tend to be more

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and do some things in order. We can say that parents’ behaviour in developing their

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will always be run in the family.

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, we

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cannot close our eyes that technology is significantly showing the uptrend year by year. Data from The Economist says that

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and internet uses is increasing sharply

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2014 till 2021. With the rise of them, the

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and pop culture cannot be resisted. Even though the family does not talk too much about them,

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still have

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access through the presence of

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they are meeting

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daily. Kids can easily follow what their

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talk and do,

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imitate the happening trend in social

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, without really knowing

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actual meaning of them. Overall, it is easier

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child

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to imitate their surroundings by the

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, pop culture, and

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; rather than imitate the parents’ taught especially when they have

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actively working parents.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some parents nowadays put more pressure on their children to succeed. Why? Negative or positive?

In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays more and more people have access to the Internet, but the constant availability of any information worsens people’s memory and critical thinking skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other people say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The increasing prevalence of convenience food will lead to traditional methods of cooking disappearing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?