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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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Child’s development
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nowadays has been triggering some discussions about the
influence
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media
, pop culture, and
friends
 in how kids react and think towards their surroundings. Apart from that, some people still set in their way that family plays the most significant role. As I have been observing
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 the past years, I must say I totally agree that family is no longer the major
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 due to several reasons. In essence, it has been believed that family is the
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children
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sociology books over the decades.
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, what they are seeing from their family, especially their parents, can be easily imitated in their daily behaviour.
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strict rules,
children
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 and do some things in order. We can say that parents’ behaviour in developing their
children
 will always be run in the family.
Besides
, we
also
 cannot close our eyes that technology is significantly showing the uptrend year by year. Data from The Economist says that
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 and internet uses is increasing sharply
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 2014 till 2021. With the rise of them, the
influence
 of
media
 and pop culture cannot be resisted. Even though the family does not talk too much about them,
children
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access through the presence of
friends
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daily. Kids can easily follow what their
friends
 talk and do,
also
 imitate the happening trend in social
media
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 to imitate their surroundings by the
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friends
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actively working parents.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average life expectancy
  • developed world
  • increase
  • individuals
  • society
  • personal goals
  • ambitions
  • quality of life
  • leisure
  • recreation
  • healthcare costs
  • challenges
  • healthcare system
  • ageing population
  • shortage
  • available workers
  • economy
  • retirement planning
  • healthy lifestyles
  • investing
  • social support systems
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