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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #visitors #countries #customs #behaviour #host #country #differences
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 role
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all over the world
however
 there are predominantly two contrasting views where
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 of society vehemently deems that they follow the
culture
 of their own
country
 while others
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 that the overseas should welcome cultural differences . Apparently,various factors make a section of
people
 advocate that visitors should follow the
customs
 of the
country
 where they will travel and have many reasons to substantiate it.
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first
 and foremost , when they reach into other states the
people
 of that
country
 do not allow
people
 to change the
culture
 of the
country
 . They think that it is their own
country
 and if they come from overseas they need to follow the behaviour of the person who already
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 there and give respect to their
culture
.
For example
- according to the recent survey done by a
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 university 80%
australians
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Australians
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 think that the cultural differences increases due to
touristers
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tourists
tourist
.
Secondly
, every
country
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own
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 religion if we went there for
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 we need to follow their
culture
 to keep
environment
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 calm and peaceful.
On the other hand
 , some believe that host
counrty
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country
 should need to accept
culture
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the culture
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 of other
countries
 for
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 of reasons.chiefly, with different cultures the
people
 of different
countries
csn
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can
 share their
customs
 with each other and it will
furthur
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further
 lead to decrease in diversity snd increase in
lovingliness
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loveliness
loneliness
slovenliness
 around the world and it will
also
 beneficial to increase the economic growth of the
country
 which will
furthur
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further
 lead to gain more success .
Furthermore
, it has tremendous benefits for future
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 as they do
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 business with different regions and gain profits. In my profound opinion, cultural diversity is important but we need to give respect to every religion as it is helpful to get more visitors from other
countries
 which will be good for the growth of the
country
. In every
country
, different
customs
 so if anybody travel from one region to other areas they always need to follow the custom of that
country
 to remain good relations and the
hodt
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host
hot
country
people
 need to set up some rules for visitors so that way it will not
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 the
countries
customs
.
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  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

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