Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinions?
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people
believe that Use synonyms
music
helps to bring Use synonyms
people
together from different countries, different customs, and different eras. I personally agree with Use synonyms
this
view for several reasons.
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music
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people
who have Use synonyms
different
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a different
background
together is Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
that
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because
music
is known as a global language. Use synonyms
As a result
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people
from all around the world can enjoy the same Use synonyms
music
through the melody even though they do not really understand the meaning of the Use synonyms
lyric
. Fix the agreement mistake
lyrics
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song
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songs
to
many nations while Change preposition
in
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the Korean
is not widely use
globally. Through Change the verb form
is not widely used
music
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people
forget about all the Use synonyms
barrier
, they become Fix the agreement mistake
barriers
same
and one when they Correct article usage
the same
at
the concerts of famous singers and in clubs.
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In addition
, Linking Words
music
is an art form which is enjoyed by all, and Use synonyms
this
helps reduce the generation and age gaps among Linking Words
people
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music
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people
are able to enjoy the same melody, rhythm, or share the same memories through the song. Use synonyms
For instance
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classical piano Correct article usage
apply
musics
from Change the wording
music
kinds of music
pieces of music
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and Mozart eraCorrect your spelling
Beethoven
are still widely use
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are still widely used
are still widely using
for
children and adult who learn to play classical Change preposition
by
music
. Use synonyms
This
kind of Linking Words
music
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do
not have Change the verb form
does
expire
date. Another example, when Change the form of the verb
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national
anthem is played, children, adults, and elders could recall the time when they had Add an article
the national
flag
ceremony in their schools
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music
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as
a universally accepted art form, which enriches our lives and strengthens the connections between us regardless of our background, culture, and age.Correct your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite